twentysomething and clueless

Wednesday, January 23, 2008

In an attempt to keep up my poetry, I've started checking out blogs that give out prompts on a regular basis. This is my first attempt at a 3 Word Wednesday (3WW).

Tomorrow

My breath catches, heartbeats scatter
at the thought of what a far away tomorrow may bring:
you and me
breathing as one
scattered minds coming together...
tomorrow, tomorrow.

Words: breath, scattered, tomorrow

Labels: 3WW, Colin, LDR, poem

posted by Shopgirl at 10:23 PM

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At January 23, 2008 at 10:44 PM, paisley said:

"there's always tomorrow... it's only a day away....."

i couldn't help myself... i am forever breaking out in show tunes... and damn some of them really itch!!!!!

nice to meet you cat.....

At January 23, 2008 at 11:04 PM, Lauren said:

hey, this is charlieseros from xanga...just wanted to say hi! hope all is well!

At January 23, 2008 at 11:14 PM, Sandy said:

Excellent poem, CC.

Welcome to 3WW.

S

At January 23, 2008 at 11:34 PM, Lauren said:

yep! i am still trying to figure the whole blogger thing out. i will be posting similar to my xanga on here, in fact, i just put up todays post....i went to comment you on xanga and saw you were on here now, so i decided to revive my blogger....lol....

At January 24, 2008 at 12:26 AM, TC said:

My fingers are crossed that tomorrow comes someday for you...

Welcome to 3WW! :)

At January 24, 2008 at 12:27 AM, PJD said:

I like the "faraway tomorrow"... it has a nice lyrical quality, and it is the crux of the poem. Happy 3ww.

At January 24, 2008 at 3:57 AM, Tumblewords: said:

Nice post! Welcome!

At January 24, 2008 at 6:36 AM, little wing writer said:

hmm, that was good....tomorrow breathing as one ...

At January 24, 2008 at 7:50 AM, Beau Brackish said:

Great poem. "Scattered minds coming together". Isn't that the truth when love finds you.

Welcome to 3WW.

At January 24, 2008 at 5:39 PM, gautami tripathy said:

Welcome to 3WW! You have arrived..:D

if tomorrow comes

At January 25, 2008 at 8:59 AM, Princess Pointful said:

So very sweet!!
You're getting me excited for your trip...

At January 26, 2008 at 6:10 AM, Silverstar said:

Beautiful romantic poem.:)