Wednesday, January 23, 2008
In an attempt to keep up my poetry, I've started checking out blogs that give out prompts on a regular basis. This is my first attempt at a 3 Word Wednesday (3WW).

Tomorrow

My breath catches, heartbeats scatter

at the thought of what a far away tomorrow may bring:
you and me
breathing as one
scattered minds coming together...
tomorrow, tomorrow.

Words: breath, scattered, tomorrow

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posted by Shopgirl at 10:23 PM |



12 Comments:

At January 23, 2008 at 10:44 PM, Blogger paisley said:
"there's always tomorrow... it's only a day away....."

i couldn't help myself... i am forever breaking out in show tunes... and damn some of them really itch!!!!!

nice to meet you cat.....
 



At January 23, 2008 at 11:04 PM, Blogger Lauren said:
hey, this is charlieseros from xanga...just wanted to say hi! hope all is well!
 



At January 23, 2008 at 11:14 PM, Blogger Sandy said:
Excellent poem, CC.

Welcome to 3WW.

S
 



At January 23, 2008 at 11:34 PM, Blogger Lauren said:
yep! i am still trying to figure the whole blogger thing out. i will be posting similar to my xanga on here, in fact, i just put up todays post....i went to comment you on xanga and saw you were on here now, so i decided to revive my blogger....lol....
 



At January 24, 2008 at 12:26 AM, Blogger TC said:
My fingers are crossed that tomorrow comes someday for you...

Welcome to 3WW! :)
 



At January 24, 2008 at 12:27 AM, Blogger pjd said:
I like the "faraway tomorrow"... it has a nice lyrical quality, and it is the crux of the poem. Happy 3ww.
 



At January 24, 2008 at 3:57 AM, Blogger tumblewords said:
Nice post! Welcome!
 



At January 24, 2008 at 6:36 AM, Blogger LittleWing said:
hmm, that was good....tomorrow breathing as one ...
 



At January 24, 2008 at 7:50 AM, Blogger Herb Urban said:
Great poem. "Scattered minds coming together". Isn't that the truth when love finds you.

Welcome to 3WW.
 



At January 24, 2008 at 5:39 PM, Blogger gautami tripathy said:
Welcome to 3WW! You have arrived..:D

if tomorrow comes
 



At January 25, 2008 at 8:59 AM, Blogger Princess Pointful said:
So very sweet!!
You're getting me excited for your trip...
 



At January 26, 2008 at 6:10 AM, Blogger Silverstar said:
Beautiful romantic poem.:)